Saturday 6 February 2016
100 WC week #5
Hello! and welcome to the morning news. Today we have an exciting story! last night at 2am, a fire lit up at house of two, a mother and her three-month-old baby. The fireman and their winged backpacks took control of the fire while the fire woman took the baby and handled the witnesses. The fire apparently started by the mother leaving a shirt on the stove while the stove was on low all night. Nobody got injured and every thing was okay. Nobody got injured and everyone was okay. ''That's the morning news!, thank you''
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A very original take on this weeks prompt. Be sure to check over for punctuation. One line you repeated twice. Also, I notice that many of your sentences start with 3 and 4 letter words. Try switching this up a bit to make your story more interesting. Work on adding descriptive words and phrases.
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