"Why on picture day!? "
"This zit couldn't get any bigger!" The time came when it was my turn to take a picture. While I was standing in line terrified, The photographer told me to come with her to the green screen room.
"Take a seat," she told me. While I walked to the seat, I slipped my mirror out of my pocket. I stared at my gigantic zit and the spot just grew and grew.
"Say cheese,"she said.
....And that's how I ended up with the worst photo ever......
You don't need a capital after terrified and you need to fix the line with the prompt because that's not what the prompt is. Good story though.
ReplyDeleteYou need to fix the sentence the prompt is in because you are missing the but in the prompt.
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